What do you think of this story. honsety please u wont hurt my feelings?

There once was a young girl who was very pretty The other Girls were jelous of her beutiy so they plandded to get her one night while she was walking home they surronded her and beat her senseless we they stoped they noticed ahe was dead. they took her to a cliff and threw her over Days later one of the girls Bf became very sick he had the mark of lips burned into his cheek the next day he dissaperd when they found his body the head was cut off a week later the same fate befell another boy finally after five boys died the girls decied to see what was going on so they got a boy and wnet to his house where they went outside and watched him sleep about midnight the ghost of the girl they killed appered kissed the boy on the cheek leaving her mark the next night the girls returned and confronted the ghost who turned on them. the girls ran but only two got away the ghost chopped of the heads of the others and the boy the next day the villagers found the two girls who told their story.